well this is my first logue i hope it turns out well and critism will be greatly appriecated!!! hope this first imag will do good….
very nice i’ll do this one tonight when i get in from ice skating :D looking forward to it!!
sorry if this is abit conterversal!!!
Just noticed this new logue, good to see some action around here.
Vein, you said you would appreciate some (constructive?) criticism, I’m not a pro but I’ll give it go.
I quite like the first image, it is simple, bold and a good start for someone who is new to this kind of thing.
Villa’s image is excellent in composition and use of colour. The warm red draws your eyes to the centre of the image. The Bold yellow text is attracts your attention first with your gaze then moving down to read the rest of the text.
The red, although it is the most attractive colour because of its inner glow but it would be too strong on its own. It is complemented nicely by the deep warm green where the eye finds releif. This means that most viewers will study this image in a similar fashion with thier eyes starting in the center of the image, reading the text and then observing the finer details around the ouside of the image. You may even be unconciously guided by the finer details i.e. following the white lightning bolt through the planes and anti-clockwise…
…Image three is a little too busy with too many vibrant colours. My eye is not sure where to focus and darts from one area to another, not really making too much sense of it.
The neon colours are a little jarring especially the acid green which is quite sharp and there are no warm or soothing colours to offer relief.
This would have been stronger as three separate images, leaving some areas fairly empty. Next time you might be better trying to keep your image simple and carefully choosing a few colours to use.
Hope this is of some help, I am still learning a lot of this stuff myself so don’t take my word for it, get some second opinions.
The first image is promising, you obviously have talent so keep practising. Hope to see more of your work soon!
cheers i agree with ya to be honest
Work is crasy right now….will respond when things simmer down…
Sorry for the slow response. But as you know war can drag on for a long time.
I like your last image Villi, good use of movement and repetition. I like the typography, very well balanced.
very nice dunno if im gonna be able to keep up with that!! bit busy with going back to college doing a media course so ill just wait until everythings settled down! whats that font btw villi?
hey villi do you have the psd for that image? just to make things easier n quicker! n what is the font your using? email me the psd if you can [MAIL=”email@example.com”]firstname.lastname@example.org[/MAIL]
well im very happy with this i think this is a big step up from my other ones….
Really no fun if you share psd files….
Keep it going.
he jus sent me the render of the plane lol i almost forgot about this site for a minute there :P
Not that creative I know…..but hey at least I took the photo myself and I´m damn proud that I got one response in this year!!
wow was starting to think this was dead! not sure what this has to do with war but hey i can work with it! :D ill post a response when i have time!
Hi VEIN. Think of it in a post nuclear war way :)
Like a scene from a doomsday movie know what I mean?
aaa i see well i’ll have to think twice now then i did knock something up! mayb just change it a tad! thanks!
hope this is up to scratch! i also took the photo of the killer whale!!!
I like it. It´s quite surreal and good idea with the killer whales :) I´ll try to post a response in the near future.
I really like what is going on with IMG 04. Great job there, Villi.
This one seemed all over the place in the first couple of images, but VEIN did a great job on response to IMG 06 (typo aside). I would have liked to see a similar font and style used for the entry. Conversation has turned into a bit of a story.
Really looking forward to how Villi caps this off.
ARGH!! i checked and doubled checked the spellin and now you’ve mentioned it i see it dammit!!
cant wait to see the ending either!
well to be fair it was my first attempt so first couple i was tryin to find my feet!