Designologue
I would maybe like to see a little more contrast. Although this is a good first image. Really sets the stage for xavi to do cool stuff over it.
One thing that bugs me is that your thumbnail is not really a thumbnail of your image. Just bugs me, I am not even sure exactly why.
Rev.Dr. Luv:: yes u fool..the thumbnail is on the right bottom corner…well, did clevsone changed the image by any chance?’cause the color looks darker on the thumbnail, and the angle is different. so… Rev Dr. Luv could be right…haha, am i the fool?
And I do agree with Rev, it’s a nice image to start with, but I do want to see more from this image ^__^
Well I know you put alot of work into it and thats great. The contrast yes… maybe another color.
I hear ya on the contrast…I was thinking that soap only had a little bit of contrast on the edges…oh well..The thumbnail is acurate..it just got rotated or did it?
In fact, on the thumbnail I can read “BACTERIA” and on the image seems to appear “BACTIRIA”… am I blind?
working on next step man
wow, thats a good point. The trouble is I have looked at this images on three differetn computers and each one show the type a little lighter or darker.
xavi I’ve tried to keep some of the colors, adding a few comerciality to the piece :-p
i really dig this image. the colors rock, and the message is funny. i like the “bacteria eraser” idea… though it’s not totally convincing.
great job!
I love this image. And I like the fact that you added the ripple texture on the text.
Nice work^_^
I do like this image.. but i guess i wish you would have went with what I ws trying to do combining the Server Soap with actual soap… maybe i should have made that more clear in my image..
man, you are right… I was too centered on the natural soap over large bacterias and the dirty kid cryin’… next step I promise to closer to you not just in color taste!
next image coming soon…
Your just stalling man… =p On image 2 what is behind the soap? Might of worked with just white…
just bacterias… microscope view of bacterias taken from a biologcal research site (can’t remember the URL, but there were just a couple of interesting things). If I remember it as it was, these bacterias were observed from a glass of water or something like.
OH MY GOD.
i’m at a loss for words.
what is this?
What the…
ok…so because of the bacteria, ur image is infected?Well, I do like what’s going on in the background, but the type with your busy background, it’s kind of hard to read., And your blue soapy thing….I guess I just don’t get it.(It is only my opinion….)
Haha, I usually just tell my boy to fix my virus problem, may be I should try to put my computer in the washing machine next time, hee hee
I was at work when I saw #3 and was trying really hard not to laugh. If they can give birth to babies underwater, why can’t they wash them this way too. Makes sense to me!
xavi I’ve really spent more time thinking on that image than executing it. Maybe I should have more time to give to the exploration production. But I’m not quiet if there is someone waiting for me!
wtF?
bharper that was what I was thinking… Then I saw your comment and you beat me to it. I still have to say it wtf?!?
What? Why and how does this work? might of worked better color wise if the background was bright orange.
Dont mind it, looks abit different. Would have been better without the black outline on the text, to phuck people’s eye’s…
we have our child clean using soap. Clev. added the washing machine element to the exploration, with a child inside. Then I took a pet inside a washing machine and I converted it into a commercial. R-ACTIVE is a soap that cleans every bacteria…
… the background color is not in orange or lemmon yellow because this whould mean a complete revision of the exploration and I tried to keep a little sucession in the whole (as I did with #2).
The relation between #3 and #4 is, in a first place, the background. It has a similar taste… that bacckgroun can be taken as a wall of the washing machine tech room shown at #3.
The idea of R-Active was taken from the green color of “onmouseover=” notation in #3. I wanted to completely remove blue color and to set green as principal color. In this way, I centered #4 in a new technology regarding soap as a tech matter like clev. did on #3. So I converted soap in a high-tech product and explained it on a commercial.
The pet? Inside of a wash machine, as clev. did with the child at #3. So we have enough relation between #3 and #4, isn’t it?
I know that I spent more time in conception than in production so it must be the reason for your “wtF?” ;-)
suggestions?
cool you’re back!
nice re-start.
clevsone whatev.. again…. u can now finish up all your design o logues.. man i fogot how cool this site was….
My goal is to finish my unfinished but you don’t need to be so fast! I mean, I was trying to take the conversation back but I’ts been like a good bye.
Thank you for your time, I hope to see you round here soon!
yeah could of spent more time.. i figured if i didn’t get to it now i never would…
Under the microscope!